What are the advantages and disadvantages of working with a person who is very different from you?
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Characteristics of co-worker is important not only for working performance, but also for personal live. Here is a bit of expectation when I stay with very different person in company.
There would be the advantages in this situation like that he or she could cover my weakness that is caused by my character and I could help him on the opposite cases. In addition, if they are capable of counterpart’s opinions, they could get more various ideas and methods to proceed their tasks.
However, negative situation is also possible with colleague who work differently, when they cannot understand each other. Making decision is long way on meeting and there might be no synergy because their working style is so different.
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Characteristics of co-worker is important not only for working performance, but also for personal live. >>A co-worker\'s characteristics is important not only for working performance, but also for personal live.
Here is a bit of expectation when I stay with very different person in company.
>>Here is a bit of expectation when I stay with very different person in a company.
There would be the advantages in this situation like that he or she could cover my weakness that is caused by my character and I could help him on the opposite cases.
>>Here is a bit of expectation when I stay with very different person in a company.
There would be the advantages in this situation like that he or she could cover my weakness that is caused by my character and I could help him on the opposite cases.
>>Correct
In addition, if they are capable of counterpart’s opinions, they could get more various ideas and methods to proceed their tasks.
>>In addition, if they are capable of a counterpart’s opinions, they could get more various ideas and methods to proceed with their tasks.
However, negative situation is also possible with colleague who work differently, when they cannot understand each other.
>>In addition, if they are capable of a counterpart’s opinions, they could get more various ideas and methods to proceed with their tasks.
However, negative situation is also possible with colleague who work differently, when they cannot understand each other.
>>However, a negative situation is also possible with colleagues who work differently when they cannot understand each other.
Making decision is long way on meeting and there might be no synergy because their working style is so different.
>>Correct
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