What are the advantages and disadvantages ot extremely hot and extremely cold weather?
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I think the extremely hot is very hot but, extremely clld is very cold.
So I think extremely hot and extremely cold is there are only have a disadvantages.
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What are the advantages and disadvantages of extremely hot and extremely cold weather?
I think the extremely hot is very hot but, extremely clld is very cold.
>> I think extremely hot is very hot but, extremely cold is very cold.
So I think extremely hot and extremely cold is there are only have a disadvantages.
>> So I think extremely hot and extremely cold only have disadvantages.
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