What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?
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Hi there JM!
How is it going?
I am curious about your opinion regarding having children.
Did you already talk about it with your girlfriend?
Anyway, let\'s catch up tomorrow.
See you!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
I think the answer will differ from individual to individual on this question.
>>> I think the answer to this question differs from individual to individual.
Someone want to live for their life.
>>> Some people want to live for themselves.
For example, In korea, Most females give up their job, dream and their habits when they make a family.
>>> For example, in Korea, most females give up their job, dream and habits when they make a family.
To maintain their life, Some couples are discussing about whether they will have a children or not before marry.
>>> To maintain their lifestyle, some couples discuss about whether they will have children or not before marrying.
On the other hand, some couples having childrens feel happy.
>>> On the other hand, some couples having children feel happy.
Eventhough they have to give up some rights or their life, The family is more important than others like a habit and job.
>>> Even though they have to give up their rights or lifestyle, their family is more important than other things like their hobbies and jobs.
Thus I repect their decisions.
>>> Correct! [Thus,]
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