What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?

2018-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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I think the answer will differ from individual to individual on this question. Someone want to live for their life. For example, In korea, Most females give up their job, dream and their habits when they make a family. To maintain their life, Some couples are discussing about whether they will have a children or not before marry. On the other hand, some couples having childrens feel happy. Eventhough they have to give up some rights or their life, The family is more important than others like a habit and job. Thus I repect their decisions.

강사 첨삭

Hi there JM!

How is it going?

I am curious about your opinion regarding having children.

Did you already talk about it with your girlfriend?

Anyway, let\'s catch up tomorrow.

See you!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


I think the answer will differ from individual to individual on this question. 

>>> I think the answer to this question differs from individual to individual.
Someone want to live for their life.

>>> Some people want to live for themselves.

For example, In korea, Most females give up their job, dream and their habits when they make a family.

>>> For example, in Korea, most females give up their job, dream and habits when they make a family.

To maintain their life, Some couples are discussing about whether they will have a children or not before marry.

>>> To maintain their lifestyle, some couples discuss about whether they will have children or not before marrying.

On the other hand, some couples having childrens feel happy. 

>>> On the other hand, some couples having children feel happy.
Eventhough they have to give up some rights or their life, The family is more important than others like a habit and job. 

>>> Even though they have to give up their rights or lifestyle, their family is more important than other things like their hobbies and jobs.
Thus I repect their decisions.

>>> Correct! [Thus,]

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