What are the advantages and disdvantages of television?
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My television has advantages and disdvantsges.
Advantages are first is my TV has a microphon function.
And second is my TV has Zen kis.
And disdvantages are my thoughts are getting smaller.
And our eyesight is getting worse.
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My television has advantages and disdvantsges.
Advantages are first is my TV has a microphon function.
And second is my TV has Zen kis.
And disdvantages are my thoughts are getting smaller.
And our eyesight is getting worse.
Advantages are first is my TV has a microphon function.
And second is my TV has Zen kis.
And disdvantages are my thoughts are getting smaller.
And our eyesight is getting worse.
>> My television has advantages and disadvantages. First advantages is my TV has a microphone function. And second is my TV has Zen for kids. The disadvantages are our thoughts are getting narrow and our eyesight are getting worse.
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