What are the advantages and disdvantages of wacthing the television?
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The wacthing the televison of the advatages and disadvatages are advantages is TV is fun.
The televison has many fun chanals.
And disadvantages is i\'m losing my mind.
The TV is fun, but it\'s not good at our mind.
Therefore, there good and bad things about TV.
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The wacthing the televison of the advatages and disadvatages are advantages is TV is fun.
The televison has many fun chanals.
And disadvantages is i\'m losing my mind.
The TV is fun, but it\'s not good at our mind.
Therefore, there good and bad things about TV.
The televison has many fun chanals.
And disadvantages is i\'m losing my mind.
The TV is fun, but it\'s not good at our mind.
Therefore, there good and bad things about TV.
>> The advantage of watching a TV is it is fun to watch. The television has many fun and interesting channels. The disadvantage is I\'m losing my mind when watching TV. Watching TV is fun, but it\'s not good for our mind. Therefore, there are good and bad things about TV.
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