What are the advantages and the disadvantages of learning English?
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Thesedays, lots of people learn English for their second language. Also, there are advantages and disadvantages of learning English. The advantage is that we can learn new things and experience lots of things from learning English. That means we can have experiences and have lots of fun. The disadvantage is that if children learn second language too early, they will be confused with their country\'s language. So, it is not really good for children to learn English too early. I think there are always advantages and disadvantages of learning someting.
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Thesedays, lots of people learn English for their second language.
>>These days, lots of people learn English for their second language.
OR>>These days, lots of people learn English as their second language.
Also, there are advantages and disadvantages of learning English.
>>CORRECT
The advantage is that we can learn new things and experience lots of things from learning English.
>>CORRECT
That means we can have experiences and have lots of fun.
>>CORRECT
OR>>That means we can make memories and have lots of fun.
The disadvantage is that if children learn second language too early, they will be confused with their country\'s language.
>>The disadvantage is that if children learn a second language too early, they will be confused with their country\'s language.
So, it is not really good for children to learn English too early.
>>CORRECT
I think there are always advantages and disadvantages of learning someting.
>>I think there are always advantages and disadvantages of learning something.
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