What are the advantages/disadvantages of working from home?
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Above all, the advantage of working from home is flexibility.
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You can choose your own work hours to some extent.
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>> OR: You can choose your own working hours.
You can also determine your environment to work.
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While working, you can take a break anytime you want.
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By working at home you avoid hassles going to work.
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You can save on many hidden costs such as costs of commuting, fuel, and parking as well as.
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Moreover, you can take care of your house work and your children.
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There are also disadvantages.
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Distractions may arise.
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Interruptions from children, work, neighbors, friends, family may be very disruptive and special efforts must be made to make it known that you are actually working and unavailable for interruption within work hours despite your physical presence at home.
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The temptation to engage in household matters since you are at home is often very strong.
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Suddenly you may start feeling obliged to clean the home and the childcare.
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It is essential to draw line between home and work so as to avoid both areas suffering.
>> Better: It is essential to draw a line between home and work so as to avoid both areas suffering.
>> OR: It is essential to make a balance between family and work to avoid both areas suffering.
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