What are the advantages, if any, of being a dink?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the biggest advantage of being a dink is can maintain my own lifestyle after getting married.
After giving birth of a child, especially women\'s life would change a lot.
Body would change and also we should spend a lot of energy on the baby.
So for the couple who aren\'t prepared well to have a baby emotionally and financially, it could be very hard to raise their child.
For these reason, I would like to be a dink if I got married.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]. I think many Korean women would agree with you especially those who are still single and have not thought about their future yet. People are also becoming more practical these days.^^ Thank you for sharing your opinion on this subject and I look forward to our class. See you. ~ teacher Jane c\",)
I think the biggest advantage of being a dink is can maintain my own lifestyle after getting married.
>>> I think the biggest advantage of being a dink is I can maintain/ keep my own lifestyle after getting married.
After giving birth of a child, especially women\'s life would change a lot.
>>> After giving birth to a child, especially women\'s life would change a lot.
Body would change and also we should spend a lot of energy on the baby.
>>> Our bodies would change and we should spend a lot of energy on the baby.
So for the couple who aren\'t prepared well to have a baby emotionally and financially, it could be very hard to raise their child.
>>> CORRECT =)
For these reason, I would like to be a dink if I got married.
>>> For these reasons, I would like to be a dink if I got married.
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