What are the advantages of backpacking?
학생이 쓴 원문
: What are the advantages of backpacking?
the advantages of backpacking are first of all economic, to see each places in detail.
I think that it makes friends, contacks more chance with ordinary people.
Disadvaantages are more dangrous, spending times and uncomportable.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [Name]!
Happy Monday! :)
Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
I agree with everything you\'ve said in your composition.
You even mentioned it\'s disadvantage when I only asked for the advantages. ^_^
I have made some modification for you to review later on.
_Teacher Mayleen_
the advantages of backpacking are first of all economic, to see each places in detail.
>> The advantages of backpacking are first of all, it\'s economic and second, you get to see places in detail.I think that it makes friends, contacks more chance with ordinary people.
>> You get the chance to meet new friends.Disadvaantages are more dangrous, spending times and uncomportable.
>> The disadvantage is that it could be dangerous and uncomfortable.
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