What are the advantages of cosmetic surgeries? Disadvantages?

It has become very popular to get a cosmetic surgery in Korea. People no more try to hide their plastic surgery even they are celebrities. I think the main reason people want to get this surgery is they want to change their appearance way better. With medical technic's fast developement, there are many chances to get good, beautiful and young appearance. One of the biggest advantages of cosmetic surgery is allowing us to get this kind of chance. Of course, it also can be a chance for the people who get injured from accidents. In my opinion, there are very few disadvantates compare with its advantages. First, people tend to not consider the risks of the surgeries. and then, it kills our own charactors which naturally born with.

Hello [이름], Thank you for doing your homework right away. Keep it up! We will discuss this tomorrow. See you then! Teacher Faye   Here are your corrections: It has become very popular to get a cosmetic surgery in Korea. >>Cosmetic Surgery is very popular in Korea.People no more try to hide their plastic surgery even they are celebrities. >>People do not try to hide their plastic surgeries even if they were celebrities.I think the main reason people want to get this surgery is they want to change their appearance way better. >>I think the main reason why they want to have this surgery is that they want to change their appearance.With medical technic\'s fast developement, there are many chances to get good, beautiful and young appearance. >> With medical technic\'s fast developement, there are many chances to look good, beautiful and young.One of the biggest advantages of cosmetic surgery is allowing us to get this kind of chance. >>Correct!Of course, it also can be a chance for the people who get injured from accidents. >>Of course, it is also good for the injured and people who had had accidents.In my opinion, there are very few disadvantates compare with its advantages. >>In my opinion, there are very few disadvantages compared th its advantages. First, people tend to not consider the risks of the surgeries. >>Correct!and then, it kills our own charactors which naturally born with. >>And it kills the our naturally born characteristics.