What are the advantages of eating out?

2019-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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I can\'t cook the whole food in the world, so I need to eat out to taste variety of food from all over the country. The best of eating out is that we can have all kinds of food easily. I can eat Chinese, Japanese, Vietnamese, Indian, Italian, American, Mexican food and Traditional Korean food in my neighbor hood. I love all kinds of food and I love Korea where I can have these food all! :)

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]!

Thank you for sending your composition. ^^

I really appreciate it.

Have a good day!

~Teacher Gina

I can\'t cook the whole food in the world, so I need to eat out to taste variety of food from all over the country.

>> I can\'t cook all of the food in the world, so I need to eat out to taste different varieties of food from different countries.

(All over the country means all over South Korea so I changed it to different countries.)

The best of eating out is that we can have all kinds of food easily.
>> The best thing about eating out is that we can have all kinds of food easily.

I can eat Chinese, Japanese, Vietnamese, Indian, Italian, American, Mexican food and Traditional Korean food in my neighborhood.

>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I can find and taste Chinese, Japanese, Vietnamese, Indian, Italian, American, Mexican food and Traditional Korean food in my neighborhood.

I love all kinds of food and I love Korea where I can have these food all! :)

>> I love all kinds of food and I love Korea where I can have all of these food! :)

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