What are the advantages of having a big family?
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I like big family have a lot of people.
Big family don\'t have to spend long time to go to grandparents\'s house
It\'s good to have a lot of people to talk together.
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What are the advantages of having a big family?
I like big family have a lot of people.
>> I like big families because they have a lot of people.
Big family don\'t have to spend long time to go to grandparents\'s house
>> Big families don\'t have to spend a long time going to their grandparents\' home.
It\'s good to have a lot of people to talk together.
>> It\'s good to have a lot of people to talk to.
>> OR: I think talking together with a lot of people feels good.
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