What are the advantages of having a pet?

Having pets takes a lot of responsibilities, Sir [이름]!

Thank you for reminding me of how therapeutic it is to be with pets through handing in another composition. Keep up the good work!

~Teacher Eunice

The advantages of having a pet is that we don\'t feel lonely. 

>>> One of the advantages of having a pet is that we don\'t feel lonely. 

Many people insist that pets are not just animals, they are our lifetime companion.

>>> Many people insist that pets are not just animals, they are our lifetime companions.

Actually, I am not a guy who likes raising a pet in the house and outside at home too.

>>> Actually, I am not a guy/person who likes raising a pet inside nor outside the house.

However, I think having a pets have a lot of advantages for adults who are living alone and patients.

>>> However, I think having pets have a lot of advantages for adults who are living alone and patients.

But people spend a lot of money for their pets.

>>> In addition, people spend a lot of money for their pets.

I think that we would rather spending money for humans than using money for pets..

>>> I think that we would rather spend money for humans than spending for pets.

Because people tend to pay for beauty of animals and keeping health. 

>>> Because people tend to pay for grooming and keeping their pets healthy. 

Furthermore, we must care for the situation that pets died.

>>> Furthermore, we must be aware of the situation when pets die.

It is not easy issues we can get over. 

>>> It is not easy to get over with it.

>>> OR: It is not easy to overcome it. 

I think that having a pets have some advantages and disadvantages.

>>> I think that having pets have some advantages and disadvantages.