What are the advantages of living in a cold places.
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I think living in the cold places is very fun because making snowman and playing a snowfighiting always.
So living in the cold places is very good.
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What are the advantages of living in a cold places.
I think living in the cold places is very fun because making snowman and playing a snowfighiting always.
>>> I think living in cold places is very fun because you can build snowmen and have snowball fights.
So living in the cold places is very good.
>>> So living in cold places is very enjoyable.
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