What are the advantages of owning a car?
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there are lots of advantages of owning a car.
>> correct!~
or:
>> There are lots of advantages of owning a car.
if we have a car,
we can go anywhere when we wanna go. even if that time is midnight.
>> If we have a car, we can go anywhere when we wanna go even when it is already midnight.
we don\'t need to worried about missing the final train.
>> We don\'t need to worry about missing the last train.
we can save the time not to transfer transport
>> We can save time by not transferring to different kinds of transportation.
we can buy lots of thing because we can carry by car.
>> We can buy many things because we can carry them using our cars.
and last, if we late to school or work, we can arrive before the other transport.
>> Lastly, if we\'re late for school or work, we can arrive faster than using public transportation.
so i want to get a car!!! =
>> correct!
or:
>> I want to own a car.
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