What are the advantages of smart phone?
학생이 쓴 원문
Absolutely, things I can feel are convenient in my life. When I visit the first place, I can find a destination easily. Also, things that I don\'t know too. And it\'s the best communicating way I\'ve been ever, Wherever I am. I guess the best advantage by u[이름]g smart phone is to keep in touch with you, whether I have a class in Power English or not. :)
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name], I\'m so glad to have been your teacher. I watched you learn and grow and change from day to day. I hope that all the little things I\'ve done, have helped in some small way! With love and support.
Absolutely, things I can feel are convenient in my life.
>>> Smart phone makes my life very convenient.
When I visit the first place, I can find a destination easily.
>>> When I want to visit a new place, I can find my destination easily.
Also, things that I don\'t know too.
>>> It also gives me the information that I need.
And it\'s the best communicating way I\'ve been ever, Wherever I am.
>>> And it\'s the best communication device I\'ve ever had.
I guess the best advantage by u[이름]g smart phone is to keep in touch with you, whether I have a class in Power English or not.
>>> I guess the best advantage of u[이름]g a smart phone is to keep in touch with you, whether I have a class in Power English or not.
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