What are the advantages or disadvantages of being in a hurry all the time?

2019-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

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I retired 2 years ago which is a very blessing my life. I have a lot of free time also whatever I want to do something I can do my way. Most Korean are hurry for everything. Sometimes is a good but sometimes is not a good. For example when I go to the city hall most systems are computerization that is why everything are So fast. Big difference is a America. If I have a some issues have to wait until the other person say something. I learned many way in my family.Usually I am not a talker I am a listener. Being in a hurry all the time nota good our healthy. We have to get wisdom and be patient also do not be lazy. I have a very bad eating habbit. Always eat so fast. I made decision this year If I eat something I want to slow little by little.

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T[이름]k you for doing your homework [이름]nah! See you tomorrow.


-Teacher Shelly-




I retired 2 years ago which is a very blessing my life.

>>> I retired 2 years ago which is a great blessing in my life.
 I have a lot of free time also whatever I want to do something I can do my way.

>>> I have a lot of free time. I also can do whatever I want to do. Something I can do on my own. 
 Most Korean are hurry for everything.

>>> Most Koreans are in a hurry for everything.

Sometimes is a good but sometimes is not a good.

>>> Sometimes it is good but often times it is not good.
 For example when I go to the city hall most systems are computerization that is why everything are
So fast.

>>> For example, when I got to the city hall, most systems are computerized. It was really fast.

Big difference is a America.

>>> It is very different in America.

 If I have a some issues have to wait until the other person say something.

>>>  If I have some issues, I have to wait until the other person says something.
 I learned many way in my family.

>>> I learned a lot in my family.

Usually I am not a talker I am a listener.

>>> I\'m not usually the speaker, I\'m more of a listener.
 Being in a hurry all the time nota good our healthy.

>>> Being in a hurry all the time is not good for our health.
 We have to get wisdom and be patient also do not be lazy.

>>> We have to get wisdom and be patient. We should not be lazy.
 I have a very bad eating habit.

>>> Correct! 

Always eat so fast.

>>> I always eat fast.

I made decision this year If I eat something
I want to slow little by little.

>>> I made a decision this year that I will be eating little by little. 

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