What are the advantages or disadvantages of being in a hurry all the time?
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I retired 2 years ago which is a very blessing my life.
>>> I retired 2 years ago which is a great blessing in my life.
I have a lot of free time also whatever I want to do something I can do my way.
>>> I have a lot of free time. I also can do whatever I want to do. Something I can do on my own.
Most Korean are hurry for everything.
>>> Most Koreans are in a hurry for everything.
Sometimes is a good but sometimes is not a good.
>>> Sometimes it is good but often times it is not good.
For example when I go to the city hall most systems are computerization that is why everything are
So fast.
>>> For example, when I got to the city hall, most systems are computerized. It was really fast.
Big difference is a America.
>>> It is very different in America.
If I have a some issues have to wait until the other person say something.
>>> If I have some issues, I have to wait until the other person says something.
I learned many way in my family.
>>> I learned a lot in my family.
Usually I am not a talker I am a listener.
>>> I\'m not usually the speaker, I\'m more of a listener.
Being in a hurry all the time nota good our healthy.
>>> Being in a hurry all the time is not good for our health.
We have to get wisdom and be patient also do not be lazy.
>>> We have to get wisdom and be patient. We should not be lazy.
I have a very bad eating habit.
>>> Correct!
Always eat so fast.
>>> I always eat fast.
I made decision this year If I eat something
I want to slow little by little.
>>> I made a decision this year that I will be eating little by little.
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