What are the bad things about fashion?
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Well... I don\'t know now, but there were a lot of bad fashions in the past such as super tight pants, sleeveless shirt, sandals with socks, and etc. I didn\'t understand why they used to do it including me at that time. Also, why it was famous. To my eye, someone who started to wear it affected that fashions to other people.
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
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Well... I don\'t know now, but there were a lot of bad fashions in the past such as super tight pants, sleeveless shirt, sandals with socks, and etc.
>> Well... I don\'t know now, but there were a lot of bad fashion trends in the past such as super tight pants, sleeveless shirt, sandals with socks, and etc.
I didn\'t understand why they used to do it including me at that time.
>> CORRECT!Also, why it was famous.
>> Also, I don\'t know the reason why it was famous.
To my eye, someone who started to wear it affected that fashions to other people.
>> To my eye, someone who started wearing it affected the fashion preferences of other people.
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