What are the benefits of eating three eggs a day for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
now a days, i eating two eggs in morning, and eating one egg in night.
eating eggs reason is total three.
first, i eating eggs when i [이름]gry,i feel full.
and two reason is muscle increase. but i don\'t like gym and i don\'t exercise...
finally, because it\'s a delicious.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I can really see how much you like and enjoy eating eggs. I think they are a good source of protein that can help build muscles and provide vitamins. Just remember that it is still important to have a balanced diet no matter how much you love eggs!
- T. Caitlyn
now a days, i eating two eggs in morning, and eating one egg in night.
>> Nowadays, I eat two eggs in the morning and one egg at night.
eating eggs reason is total three.
eating eggs reason is total three.
>> There are three reasons why I eat eggs.
first, i eating eggs when i [이름]gry,i feel full.
first, i eating eggs when i [이름]gry,i feel full.
>> First, I eat eggs when I’m [이름]gry because they make me feel full.
and two reason is muscle increase. but i don\'t like gym and i don\'t exercise...
and two reason is muscle increase. but i don\'t like gym and i don\'t exercise...
>> The second reason is to build muscle, but I don’t like going to the gym and I don’t exercise.
finally, because it\'s a delicious.
finally, because it\'s a delicious.
>> Finally, because they’re delicious.
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