What are the benefits of having constant com[이름]ication with your family?

2023-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

학생이 쓴 원문

Well... If I have constant com[이름]ication with my family, I\'ll be getting familiar with them. It is necessary even between family. Although one of a person in the family, I have to com[이름]icate each other because we have no time each one.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes to remember:

1. If I have constant com[이름]ication with my family, I\'ll be getting familiar with them. 
>>If I have constant com[이름]ication with my family, I\'ll be more familiar with them. 

2. It is necessary even between family.
>>It is necessary even between family members.

3. Although one of a person in the family, I have to com[이름]icate each other because we have no time each one.
>>We have to com[이름]icate with each other because sometimes we don\'t have the time to do it.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 · 홈