What are the benefits of having just a few close friends ? How about the benefits of having many fri

2024-02-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kristine

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I don\'t think I did it for any particular purpose when I made friends. However, from my work life, I sometimes intentionally approached specific persons for promotion or good positions, but I don\'t think that the persons are my true friends. In my case. I have made many friends in my life. I\'ve been interacting with my hometown friends, college friends, military rotc(reserved officer\'s training corps) classmates, and co-workers and I get along well with most of them, having periodic meetings. And three or four friends in each group are really close, so when I have difficulties, I ask them for advice, and on the contrary, if they need help, I\'ve been willing to respond to it. So, in conclusion, I didn\'t make a lot of friends or choose only a small number of friends intentionally. While in school and at work, I made many friends naturally and I only got closer to a few of them in particular.

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Hello there, [이름]! 

Thanks for doing your homework. See you in class! 

- Kristine ^^ 

I don\'t think I did it for any particular purpose when I made friends.
>> Correct.
However, from my work life, I sometimes intentionally approached specific persons for promotion or good positions, but I don\'t think that the persons are my true friends.
>> However, I don\'t believe that the people I have purposefully approached for promotions or outstanding positions at work are my actual friends.
In my case. I have made many friends in my life.
>> I had made lots of friend in my life. 
I\'ve been interacting with my hometown friends, college friends, military rotc(reserved officer\'s training corps) classmates, and co-workers and I get along well with most of them, having periodic meetings.
>> I\'ve been interacting with my hometown friends, college friends, military ROTC (reserved officer\'s training corps) classmates, and co-workers, and I get along well with most of them, having periodic meetings.
And three or four friends in each group are really close, so when I have difficulties, I ask them for advice, and on the contrary, if they need help, I\'ve been willing to respond to it.
>> Correct.
So, in conclusion, I didn\'t make a lot of friends or choose only a small number of friends intentionally.
>> To sum up, I didn\'t actively choose to make a lot of friends or make many friends.
While in school and at work, I made many friends naturally and I only got closer to a few of them in particular.
>> Correct.

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