What are the benefits of healthy foods? Explain in 7 sentences.

2019-08-15 · 첨삭 강사 James

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Healthy foods give us nutrition we need. we might as well pick and eat them. Accoding to some articles, almost of vegeitables include to healthy foods. by eating them we are more healthy and provide toword our body. Therefore, we can expand our life. it means that our ages will be longer than before. In addition, the quilty of our life will be more and more higher because we manage to get healthy and a long life through healthy foods.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. You’re right, so we need to have a healthy diet😊Happy holiday!

- T. James

Healthy foods give us nutrition we need.

>>> Healthy foods give us the nutrition we need.

 we might as well pick and eat them.

>>> We might as well pick it up and eat it.

Accoding to some articles, almost of vegeitables include to healthy foods. by eating them we are more healthy and provide toword our body.

>>> According to some articles, Almost vegetables have a healthy nutrition\'s, by eating them we will be healthier and stronger.

 Therefore, we can expand our life. it means that our ages will be longer than before. 

>>> Therefore, we can expand our lives, it means that we can live longer than before. 

In addition, the quilty of our life will be more and more higher because we manage to get healthy and a long life through healthy foods.

>>> In addition, the quality of our life will be healthier, because we manage to be healthy and a long life through healthy foods. 


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