What are the benefits of waking up early?
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If you wake up early, there are some benefits. In order to get up early, we should go to bed early. It make us a regular lifestyle and we can keep healthy life. And people say “The early bird catches the worm, It means we must be diligent and work hard to succeed in the field in which we study and work.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름] Ki! Thank you for sharing your ideas about the benefits of waking up early. We will discuss more about this in class. I will see you then. Take care always!~ T. Lyn
If you wake up early, there are some benefits.
>>Waking up early has several benefits.
In order to get up early, we should go to bed early.
>>To wake up early, we have to go to bed early.
It make us a regular lifestyle and we can keep healthy life.
>>If we can make it us a regular lifestyle, well it helps us maintain a healthy life.
And people say “The early bird catches the worm, It means we must be diligent and work hard to succeed in the field in which we study and work.
>>There is a saying, \"The early bird catches the worm!\" it means that we must be diligent and strive to succeed in the field of study and work.
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