What are the benefits of watching comedy movies?
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WRITING TASK: What are the benefits of watching comedy movies?
I usually feel like watching a comedy movie or variety show when I want to rest.
Comedy movies makes me laugh, therefore I can stop thinking about my work, my infant care.
Sometimes I just want to spend time laughing without thinking, and comedy movies or variety show make me do that.
For that reason, I love comedy movies.
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Hi, Ji [이름]! I am impressed that you are able to write well. Enjoy life!-Faith-
WRITING TASK: What are the benefits of watching comedy movies?>> CORRECT
I usually feel like watching a comedy movie or variety show when I want to rest.
>> CORRECT
OR I am in the mood to watch comedy movies or variety shows when I just want to relax.
Comedy movies makes me laugh, therefore I can stop thinking about my work, my infant care.
>> Comedy movies make me laugh, therefore I can stop thinking about my work and my infant care.
Sometimes I just want to spend time laughing without thinking, and comedy movies or variety show make me do that.
Comedy movies makes me laugh, therefore I can stop thinking about my work, my infant care.
>> Comedy movies make me laugh, therefore I can stop thinking about my work and my infant care.
Sometimes I just want to spend time laughing without thinking, and comedy movies or variety show make me do that.
>> Sometimes, I just want to spend time laughing without thinking, and comedy movies or variety shows make me do that.
For that reason, I love comedy movies.
For that reason, I love comedy movies.
>> CORRECT
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