What are the benefits you get from using a computer?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think can typing on a computer is a great efficiency when writing an essay because if I didn\'t have a computer, I have to write my essay by hand for hours. And compared to books, computers have the advantage that find the information I want quickly and easily.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sere,
Computers benefit the business and personal world by being able to do the following more efficiently. A computer system can use its stored information more appropriately as compared to another device. Computers help you to connect with your friend, family, or other relatives long-distance through e-mail and social networking. The computer is really helpful to us in many ways.
~ Teacher Quenny
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What are the benefits you get from using a computer?
>> What are the benefits you get from using a computer?
I think can typing on a computer is a great efficiency when writing an essay because if I didn\'t have a computer, I have to write my essay by hand for hours. And compared to books, computers have the advantage that find the information I want quickly and easily.
>>I think typing using a computer is very efficient when writing an essay because if I don\'t have a computer, I have to write by my hand and it will take hours before I can finish it. And compared to books, computers have the advantage that finds information easily and quickly.
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What are the benefits you get from using a computer?
I think can typing on a computer is a great efficiency when writing an essay because if I didn\'t have a computer, I have to write my essay by hand for hours. And compared to books, computers have the advantage that find the information I want quickly and easily.
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