What are the benefits you get from using a computer?
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Acturly I don\'t know the benefits from using a computer.
But I know the using a laptop.
But I don\'t know the benefits too.
And I don\'tknow the benefits of the smart phone ether.
I don\'t know the benefits of smart phone, laptop and a computer.
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Acturly I don\'t know the benefits from using a computer.
>> Actually, I don\'t know the benefits of using a computer.
But I know the using a laptop.
>> But I know how to use a laptop.
But I don\'t know the benefits too.
>> CORRECT!
And I don\'tknow the benefits of the smart phone ether.
>> And I don\'t know the benefits of a smart phone either.
I don\'t know the benefits of smart phone, laptop and a computer.
>> I don\'t know the benefits of a smart phone, a laptop, and a computer.
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