What are the best and worst things about being a child?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I back to a child, I would like to cry when I am sad and to dance when I am delighted, doing not care anyone.
These things are the best things for child. So I envy these things.
But If I back to a child, I would not like to go through the students period that have to study hard. Of course I have been happy a lot with my friends when I was student, But I was hard to prepare the enterance examination to enter university. It was the worst thing for me to prepare the examination.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. I agree with you. If you ask me what I like about being a child, it is having to worry about nothing.
Life was easier being a kid.
- T. Beth
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If I back to a child, I would like to cry when I am sad and to dance when I am delighted, doing not care anyone.>>> If I go back to being a child, I would cry when I am sad and dance when I am delighted without caring about anyone.
These things are the best things for child.
These things are the best things for child.
>>> These things are the best things for a child.
>>> OR: These things are the best things about being a child.
So I envy these things.
>>> correct
But If I back to a child, I would not like to go through the students period that have to study hard.
But If I back to a child, I would not like to go through the students period that have to study hard.
>>> But if I go back to being a child, I would not like to go through the student\'s period where I have to study hard.
Of course I have been happy a lot with my friends when I was student, But I was hard to prepare the enterance examination to enter university.
>>> Of course I have been happy a lot with my friends when I was a student, but I had a hard time to prepare for the entrance examination in the university.
It was the worst thing for me to prepare the examination.
>>> correct
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