What are the best and worst things about being a student?

2024-03-11 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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The best thing about being a student is that I can meet my friends at school. Because if I don\'t meet my friends I feel loney and sad. I like my friends very much. Bad things about being a student is that some friends make fun of me and I don\'t like to wake up early.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
It\'s been a while.
Your improvement is something I really appreciate.
I think that you can express yourself better now.
I hope you can keep this up and challenge yourself more.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The best thing about being a student is that I can meet my friends at school.
>> The best thing about being a student is that I can meet my friends in school.
Because if I don\'t meet my friends I feel loney and sad.
>> If I don\'t see my friends, I would feel lonely and sad.
I like my friends very much.
>> Correct
Bad things about being a student is that some friends make fun of me and I don\'t like to wake up early.
>> The bad things about being a student are that some friends make fun of me and I don\'t like waking up early.

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