What are the best and worst things about October for you?
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The best things about October for me is becoming winter and there are many holidays.
The worst things about October for me is a getting Vaccinated against the flu.
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What are the best and worst things about October for you?
The best things about October for me is becoming winter and there are many holidays.
>> The best things about October for me are it is the sign that winter is coming and there are many holidays.
The worst things about October for me is a getting Vaccinated against the flu.
>> The worst thing about October for me is getting a flu vaccine.
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