What are the best memories you have spent with your grandparents?
학생이 쓴 원문
The best memories with my grandparents are when I was 6 years old, I went to Gangwondo with my grandparents and their friends. Because my grandparents and their friends were played funny with me. So it was best memories with my grandparents.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy!
Wow~ I hope you can spend more time with your grandparents and create happy memories with them. ^_^
The best memories with my grandparents are when I was 6 years old,
>>The best memories with my grandparents are from when I was 6 years old,
I went to Gangwondo with my grandparents and their friends.
>>CORRECT
Because my grandparents and their friends were played funny with me.
>>Because my grandparents and their friends are playing with me.
So it was best memories with my grandparents.
>>So, it was my best memory with my grandparents.
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