What are the best parts of your weekend?
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Hello Hanse!
Happy Monday! Thank you for taking the class with me today and for doing the homework composition. I like that you have a very positive attitude towards work. Keep it up! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
1. Recently, It not good parts of my weekend.because It is like weeks have to work to do on weekend.
>>Recently, there are parts of my weekend that are not good. That is because there\'s a lot of work to do on the weekend.
2. But It is good to have so many works for me. working is so fun and more feeling achivement to me.
>>However, it is good to have a lot of work too. Working is so fun and it gives me a feeling of achievement.
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