What are the best ways to avoid getting sick?
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If I don\'t face any stress and hard work, we would live longer than now.
I think that the human do too many works. we should work less than now.
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If I don\'t face any stress and hard work, we would live longer than now.
>>If we didn\'t face any stress or hard work, we would live longer than we do now.
I think that the human do too many works. we should work less than now.
>>I think humans do too much work. We should work less than we do now.
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