What are the best ways to avoid getting sick?
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i think Sufficient sleep and food , regular exercise , The most important is sleep . because new cells are created while you sleep, Those cells boost immunity.
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Hey Kyle! Job well done on today\'s homework. You gave another long answer. Keep it up!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
i think Sufficient sleep and food , regular exercise , The most important is sleep . because new cells are created while you sleep, Those cells boost immunity.
>> I think sufficient sleep, regular exercise, and proper nutrition are crucial, with sleep being the most important. New cells are created during sleep, and these cells play a vital role in boosting immunity.
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