What are the best ways to make a good first impression?
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I think that to show your kindness to them is a very good way. If you behavor kindly, your friend and the other people like your impression. Also, you can make friends easily. So, having kindness is very inportant.
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I think that to show your kindness to them is a very good way.
>> I think that to show your kindness is a very good way.
If you behavor kindly, your friend and the other people like your impression.
>> If you behave in a kind manner, your friends and other people will like you.
Also, you can make friends easily.
>> Correct
So, having kindness is very inportant.
>> Correct
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