What are the biggest changes faced by humanity right now?

2018-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Hi, Lynn. I am sorry. I was talking with my mom about serious things at our scheduled time. Here's my composition. I believe it is confidently predicted AI will change the world abruptly. It is maybe because I majored in computer science and software engineering, but I guess my field will be the most influential industry in the globe. We will encounter extremely automated life soon. For now, I think humanity is around the tipping point of big changes.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!(\",)

It\'s okay I understand.

I agree with you but personally the world of AI is unknown to me so it\'s kinda scary.

~T. Lynn

I believe it is confidently predicted AI will change the world abruptly.

>> correct!
 It is maybe because I majored in computer science and software engineering, but I guess my field will be the most influential industry in the globe.

>> correct!
 We will encounter extremely automated life soon.

>> correct!
 For now, I think humanity is around the tipping point of big changes.

>> correct!

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