What are the biggest problems facing our environment?
학생이 쓴 원문
The gab between advanced country and development country is biggest problem that makes environment hard.
Development countries have to run the factories to have money. Because they don\'t have composure to study and development technology like reducing carbon emission.
We have to share our knowledge to live together
It\'s not a simple decision, but thinking the next generation, it is essential
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you so much for giving your answer and for making this composition. ^^
I hope that you will have a good day and always take care.
Let\'s to our best in helping the environment even in our small ways. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> The gap between an advanced and developed countries is the biggest problem that makes environmental issues.
Development countries have to run the factories to have money.
Development countries have to run the factories to have money.
>> Developed countries have to run the factories to have money.
Because they don\'t have composure to study and development technology like reducing carbon emission.
>> And they don\'t have the composure to study and develop technologies like reducing carbon emission.
We have to share our knowledge to live together.
>> CORRECT.
It\'s not a simple decision, but thinking the next generation, it is essential
>> It is not a simple decision but is is essential when thinking about the next generation.
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