What are the biggest problems with living in cities?

2021-03-23 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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The biggest problems is very crowd and very dizzing. My favorite cite is small ,can see the sea, and have some beautiful guest house.

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The biggest problems is very crowd and very dizzing.
>> The biggest problem is it is very crowded and dizzying.

My favorite cite is small ,can see the sea, and have some beautiful guest house.
>> My favorite place is small, where I can see the sea, and go to some beautiful guest houses.

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