What are the biggiest problems with living in cities?
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I think that it is noise such as car noise, up floor noise, etc.
But I like urban life. Because it\'s very convient and I can just walk many stores.There is good accessbillity. I think I should live in city as I\'ve gotten older.But I don\'t like to live in big city. The reason is too complicated.
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Hi, Miss [이름]su!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I think that it is noise such as car noise, up floor noise, etc.
>> I think that it is the noise such as car noise, noise coming from the upper floors, etc.
But I like urban life.
>> But I like the urban life.
Because it\'s very convient and I can just walk many stores.
>> That\'s because it\'s very convenient and I can just walk around many stores.
There is a good accessbillity.
There is a good accessbillity.
>> CORRECT!
I think I should live in city as I\'ve gotten older.
I think I should live in city as I\'ve gotten older.
>> I think I should live in the city as I\'ve gotten older.
But I don\'t like to live in big city.
>> But I don\'t like to live in a big city.
The reason is too complicated.
>> CORRECT!
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