What are the classic video games that you grew up with? Can you compare them to video games are thei
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I think there were 2D graphics in previous works compared to current works. And now, there are 3D and VR graphics. Those things I\'ve been throught that the technology has been developed, it can get me feeling excited. I guess the biggest difference is the graphic difference between previous works and current works.
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Here are my corrections for today, Elic. Notice the placement of words and sentence patterns that I\'ve used. Try to study them and apply them in your future compositions. If it helps, try to put the time indicator first (ex. today, tomorrow, two weeks ago, etc.) This will help you create better looking and better sounding sentences, without the hassle of putting words in order. Thank you very much for your effort in this homework!
- Teacher Raven
>> Unlike today, I think previous versions had 2D graphics.
And now, there are 3D and VR graphics.
>> Correct.
Those things I\'ve been throught that the technology has been developed, it can get me feeling excited.
>> Technological developments get me feeling excited.
I guess the biggest difference is the graphic difference between previous works and current works.
>> I guess the biggest difference between past and current video games is their graphics.
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