What are the comedy movies you have seen?

2021-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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I have seen the comedy movies such as \'Mr. [Name]\'. But I prefer social issues and beautiful movies to comedy movies. I have hard time to concentrate on the situation of comedy. It feels compelling and childish. It was the first day that the new grades start in March 2nd. The first grade sutdents came to school holding their parents\' hands. I reminded my memories when my elder daughter had entered an elementary school. Recently the temperature has changed up and down unpredictablely.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
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Teacher Elly.
What are the comedy movies you have seen?
I have seen the comedy movies such as \'Mr. [Name]\'.
>>I have seen some comedy movies such as \"Mr. [Name]\".
or>>I have seen the comedy movie titled \"Mr. [Name]\".
But I prefer social issues and beautiful movies to comedy movies.
>>But I prefer movies on social issues and beautiful movies to comedy movies.
I have hard time to concentrate on the situation of comedy.
>>I have a hard time concentrating when watching a comedy.
It feels compelling and childish.
CORRECT!
or>>It is both compelling and childish.
It was the first day that the new grades start in March 2nd.
>>It is the first day of the new semester on March 2nd.
The first grade students came to school holding their parents\' hands.
CORRECT!
or>>The grade one students came to school holding their parents\' hands.
I reminded my memories when my elder daughter had entered an elementary school.
>>It reminded me of some memories when my older daughter entered elementary school.
Recently the temperature has changed up and down unpredictablely.
>>Recently, the temperature has unpredictably changed from high to low.

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