What are the common crimes committed in South Korea and how do you think should be lessened?
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What are the common crimes committed in South Korea and how do you think should be lessened?
Our country doesn\'t have a lot of crime.
Recently, crimes of child abuse is increasing every year. It is emerging the social problem.
It is difficult to deal with an individual family problem.
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I actually heard about that and I feel really bad for those children. I hope they can get the justice that they deserve.
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Recently, crimes of child abuse is increasing every year.
>> Recently, crimes on child abuse is increasing.
It is emerging the social problem.
>> It is an emerging social problem.
It is difficult to deal with an individual family problem.
>> It is difficult to deal with individual family problems.
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