What are the common flowers found in your country?
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In my country, there is four season.
So it is different from the common flowers by season.
In spring, we can usually see a forsythia and an azalea and cherry blossoms.
In summer and fall, we can usually see ginkgo and maple.
In winer, we cann't see some flowers beacause it is very cold to survive for flower.
And this days, cherry blossom is favorite flower in korea. So it hold the cherry blossom festival every year. And so many people go to see them every year.
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In my country, there is four season.
>>There are four seasons in Korea.So it is different from the common flowers by season.
>>So, different flowers grow in every season.In spring, we can usually see a forsythia and an azalea and cherry blossoms.
>>We can usually see forsythia, azalea and cherry blossoms in spring.In summer and fall, we can usually see ginkgo and maple.
>>In summer and in fall, we have ginkgo and maple.
In winer, we cann\'t see some flowers beacause it is very cold to survive for flower.
>>And in winer, we can\'t see any flowers because it is very cold and the flowers can\'t survive during this time of the year.And this days, cherry blossom is favorite flower in korea.
>>In these days, cherry blossoms are the most popular flowers in Korea.
So it hold the cherry blossom festival every year.
>>We have cherry blossom\'s festival every year.
And so many people go to see them every year.
>>That\'s why there are many people visit this event.
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