What are the common gadgets used by children these days?
학생이 쓴 원문
These days many children have a smartphone.
Actually, it\'s not only children but also adults.
And many children have game machines.
강사 첨삭
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These days many children have a smartphone.
>> Correct
Actually, it\'s not only children but also adults.
>> Correct
And many children have game machines.
>> Also, many children have game machines.
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