What are the common souvenirs that foreigners buy from your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
Mant foreigners are buying Hanok or Taegeukgi keychain and wear the Hanbok. They show korea culture.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Na Yeng! Good job! You gave a clear answer. Just a small tip: you can say ‘Many foreigners buy…’ instead of ‘are buying,’ and ‘they show Korean culture instead of Korea culture.’ Overall, your answer is very good!
~T. Jenna
~T. Jenna
Mant foreigners are buying Hanok or Taegeukgi keychain and wear the Hanbok.
>>Many foreigners buy Hanok or Taegeukgi keychains and wear Hanbok.
They show korea culture.
>>They show Korean culture.
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Many foreigners often purchase Hanok or Taegeukgi keychains, and some wear Hanbok. These things show Korean culture and traditions.
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