What are the dangers of getting a tattoo or a piercing?
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It just my opinion, I think tattoo or piercing on body makes look like a scary person.
It\'s just ratio, but data show that most peoples are do not put a tattoo.
Among them, some peoples are really kind and they did put a tattoo to remember their family.
But if you put a tattoo on your body, you will have to proof that you are very nice person.
If we are not interested in piercing, We can remove it and probably, our body will recover like earring.
But tattoo is not removed. Thesedays, Removal technology have been really improve, So that is not impossible.
But price is really expensive. I heard that removed is more expensive than put a tattoo a ten times.
So, Really want to put a tattoo on your body, I recommend a small one.
I think it\'s dangers that we can\'t remove a tattoo on body.
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It just my opinion, I think tattoo or piercing on body makes look like a scary person.
>> It\'s just my opinion, I think a tattoo or a piercing on the body makes someone look like a scary person.
It\'s just ratio, but data show that most peoples are do not put a tattoo.
>> It\'s just ratio, but data show that most people do not put a tattoo.
Among them, some peoples are really kind and they did put a tattoo to remember their family.
>> Among them, some people are really kind and they did put a tattoo to remember their family.
But if you put a tattoo on your body, you will have to proof that you are very nice person.
>> But if you put a tattoo on your body, you have to prove that you are very nice person.
If we are not interested in piercing, We can remove it and probably, our body will recover like earring.
>> If we are not interested in piercing, we can remove it and probably, our body will recover after putting on earrings.
But tattoo is not removed.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> But tattoos are permanent.
These days, Removal Technology have been really improve, So that is not impossible.
>> These days, Removal Technology has really improved, so that is not impossible.
But price is really expensive.
>> CORRECT!
I heard that removed is more expensive than put a tattoo a ten times.
>> I heard that tattoo removal is ten times more expensive than putting on a tattoo.
So, Really want to put a tattoo on your body, I recommend a small one.
>> So, if you really want to put a tattoo on your body, I recommend a small one.
I think it\'s dangers that we can\'t remove a tattoo on body.
>> I think one of its dangers is that we can\'t remove a tattoo on your body.
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