What are the dangers of having your own business?
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There are some dangers of managing own business.
>>> There are some dangers of managing your own business.
Firstly, if it happens some problems regarding money, contracts or employees, I have to manage all of it.
>>> CORRECT
I should solve the problems and have a responsability as a boss.
>>>I should solve the problems and have a responsibility as a boss.
In addition, I think that i couldn\'t have my own time surprisingly.
>>> In addition, I think that I couldn\'t have my own time surprisingly.
I believe that a boss must be at work place from the time the employee gets to work to the end of the day for running a business.
>>> I believe that a boss must be at work place from the time the employee gets to work until the end of the day for running a business.
A boss works one by one and takes care his employees and all the company\'s things.
>>> A boss works one by one and takes care his employees and all the companies\' things.
It sounds stressful.
>>> CORRECT
>>OR: It sounds so stressful.
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