What are the difference between a teenager and an adult?
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Hi, Yeong^^
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Teenager is energetic ,impatient, selfish and unthinking more than adult.
>> Teenagers are more energetic, impatient, selfish and they think more than an adult.
The most big difference is responsibility. When we are growing up. We have get more and more responsibility such as social responsibility, personal responsibility and etc.
>> The big difference is responsibilities. When we are growing up. We have got more and more responsibilities such as social, personal and etc.
those things are making us to adult. There are some part by force. Therefore we must be respectable person to young people.
>> Those things are making us an adult. There are some parts that are natural. Therefore, we must show to the young people that they should respect adults.
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