What are the difference of your fashion in the past compared than these days?

2018-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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I usually wore a tight fitting clothes in the past, and I had three small earrings on my left ear. I wore skinny jeans and knee-high boots Of course my parents hated my fashion. I hope you don't get me wrong. I was not a punk at all. I studied well,I was a model student. After my accident, I wear comfortable and feminine clothes. I only have one earing. Of course I cannot wear that clothes because I am fat. kk

강사 첨삭

I usually wore a tight fitting clothes in the past, and I had three small earrings on my left ear.

>> I used to wear tight fitting clothes in the past. And I had three small earrings on my left ear.


 I wore skinny jeans and knee-high boots

>> CORRECT

 Of course my parents hated my fashion.

>> CORRECT


 I hope you don\'t get me wrong.

>> I hope you won\'t get me wrong.

 I was not a punk at all.

>> CORRECT


 I studied well,I was a model student.

>> CORRECT



 After my accident, I wear comfortable and feminine clothes.

>> CORRECT


 I only have one earing.

>> CORRECT

 Of course I cannot wear that clothes because I am fat. kk

>> Of course, I cannot wear those clothes anymore.



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Hahaha I can imagine kkkk ^^ it\'s okay ^^ haha I think we\'ve all been there before ^^ we go out in \"style\" and then our parents will hate it kkkk

But, it\'s okay ^^ how we dress or how we look does not mean that we are bad people. kkkk I was also doing my best to finish my studies too :D

I just wanted to fit in with other people before..that is why I was wearing clothes like that before ^^ I used to color my hair to silver color before kkkkk


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