What are the differences between a holiday you take with your family and a holiday which you take wi
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On holidays with my family, I usually rest at home and eat delicious food.
However, I usually play outside on holidays with my friends.
When I spend time with my family, I play comfortably and when I am with my friends, I take more pictures.
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I think you have really nice people surrounding you. ^^
Thank you for sharing this with me, [이름]~
See you next time!
~t. Ally
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On holidays with my family, I usually rest at home and eat delicious food.
However, I usually play outside on holidays with my friends.
When I spend time with my family, I play comfortably and when I am with my friends, I take more pictures.
>> CORRECT!
However, I usually play outside on holidays with my friends.
When I spend time with my family, I play comfortably and when I am with my friends, I take more pictures.
>> CORRECT!
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