What are the difficulties of newlyweds in your own experience?

2020-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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The difficulties of newlyweds would be different life patterns, environment change, understanding each other\'s characteristics, or more. I would say the most difficult thing for me was a different life pattern with before and after marriage. After marriage, two different families gets united and we get parents in law. We were so free to think about just two of us before marriage but now there are a lot of things to care about each other\'s family anniversaries and events.

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The difficulties of newlyweds would be different life patterns, environment change, understanding each other\'s characteristics, or more.
>> The difficulties of newlyweds would be the sudden change in life pattern in general. 

I would say the most difficult thing for me was a different life pattern with before and after marriage.
>> I would say the most difficult thing for me was the different life pattern with before and after marriage.

After marriage, two different families gets united and we get parents in law.
>> After marriage, two different families gets united and those were the in laws. 

We were so free to think about just two of us before marriage but now there are a lot of things to care about each other\'s family anniversaries and events.
>>CORRECT

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